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okay...

It is quite a long animation and there is nothing really interesting about it.

When i am watching it, i am actually waiting for some surprises or a unpredictable ending but in the end, it is just a clown's life getting screwed.

The graphic is average, there is Zero FBF and the boring content is the worse part of everything. For me, it is just a 3.75.

Gd luck on your next submission

Excellent

It is so sad that the score is so underrated..people of newgrounds doesnt really know how to vote on a good flash.

The flash is really interesting and creative even though it is a stick flash. I really liked how you make use of all the tools and frames and stuffs in flash and to convert them into weapons. Very Good

Excellent

1 of the best animators i have ever seen. Your fbf and the angles you used are extremely good. I realli love how they fought while they are dropping down to the beach and the ending part (the slow motion kick) is realli great! But there's only one problem which is your graphic..

Hope to c more of your works submitted to newgrounds:)

StephenRedmond responds:

Thanks, man. Those were some of my favourite bits too.

hm...

hm... i think your graphic isnt realli great but you just use too much of photoshop in your background which jsut lag everything. I hated the unneccessary blur effects...and I think there's something strange around the jaw and the ear area..

Honestly, i find it quite boring because there's no creativity in it. You should try modifiy the armor to make it look different but still looks like an armor and i hope you would stop using zombies and skeletons(Boring undead).. Let the paladin fight something more interesting and creative.

hm...i find it strange that pple blame you for the high score but it was actually the voters that voted it. Overall it was pretty good..

nice..

Your FBF is good but you need abit more improvements on the graphic. Tried to add more shadows and make it neater. The backgrounds can be even better if you bring it over to photoshop to improve it.

I think you should tell us more about what's happening or else most pple will give it a 3 and the score will go down. hmm.. i think you didnt stream the music??

LordDF responds:

Thanks for the review. I didn't stream the music because it goes across multiple scenes, and if I did it would stop at the end of the first scene. Or at least as far as I know. Me//sound noob.

not bad..

you have some animating skills but the graphic need some works. I dont like the background because it is too messy and the characters also need to be neater. Other than that, i think that this will be a good series if you could improve more on the graphic.

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