It is interesting in terms of what's happening and the design of this film. But the camera movement can be smoother to make it even better.
It is interesting in terms of what's happening and the design of this film. But the camera movement can be smoother to make it even better.
The flow of the story and the characters are good. This short does shows the personality of each character.
Interesting, hope to see a story plays out in your future animations :)
This is dark stuff..but interesting as well
Nice ideas, I enjoy it:)
thank you, i really appreciate it :)
Well done, Good animation that matches with with the epic music. I like how he pulls out the water from the boy's body. 4.5 stars!
It is good.
I think that you might want to move on to something less anime-like and to something that is more to your own style. Anime is good but it's better to have a unique style for your works.
I like the scale of the environment compared to the character. But then this is really a simple 3d animation. The run cycle is used throughout the film with no other obvious animation movement lol. Well only the camera moves. Mental ray can do the same trick, why use renderman for??
Btw your animation is too floaty, not much weight. I suggust you reduce the frames between each run poses.
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